Deathwiller's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ninja's Creed]

Noice.... (translation for nice)

However, it is kinda too big for a movie this lenght. The size I mean. Compress it, dont use 15 mb wav music. Be conservative.
Otherwise, it was nice,te animation. However your storytelling isnt good. :( Good job making these movies.

DISTRACT-A-BEE responds:

I did some tinkering, and hopefully the size problem is solved now :)
Still learning ^^; I'll get better I know it :)
Thanks for your advice :)

[My very First Flash]

hmmm...

I have only few things to complain and congratulate you.
First of all, There's no sound. You probbably think that it doesnt matter since animation matters. But No. Since you are probbably new to this I will bring up these points to you. The lack of sound made it stodgy and blunt. The lack of sound or music demoralizes the viewer of watching it. Without sound it feels wrong
Second of all the animation is tiny, and unfriendly big dialog boxes, where the letter ''i'' is bigger than the character is saying it. Dont make big screens and small stickmen fighting. If There is only 2 stickmen make the characters bigger or increase the capibility of the enviorment (probbably misspelt it). Make a arena or somthing to make it more tempting. I suggest dont make dialogs in stick movies, because all the viewers of stick movies just want to see characters beat the crap out of them.
Third of all, If you like this style of animating (which is small stickmen in big arenas, I suggest you to make a stickman clusterfuck. (where in one big arena 6 stickmen are fighting at the same time with each other)

Other than that it was very good for your first piece of flash animation. If you keep this wall of text in your mind, you will have more awesome in it.

Good luck making the next one.

I gave you a 4 because it is hard for me to make an opinion in numbers.

Ichi-Kats26 responds:

i actually didnt add sound cuz i dodnt know howXP... and i dont have vcam YET but wen i get it i can make the stks look bigger.... thx for the tips^^

[Unforgotten Podquest 3]

Decent animation... Hilarious...

I cant give you points for the plot and scripting and audio, cuz you dont write it. You just animate it.
In overall it was good, but work on your animation, work on smoother animations, lip syncing, make the audio more compatible with animation, and other stuff. It didnt have a preloader, that might explain why it wasn't smooth enough for me.
I Give you a 8, because the audio was funny, but only 8 cuz the animation could be better.
Btw, try to animate with your own drawn schmoopie.

[Animator vs. Animation II]

W00t

WOW. I loved that animation. It was very intresting, i even had to watch it twice. I would love to see another Animator vs. animation 3. This was waaay better, keep up the work.

[Eski: 008]

Still a crap

it was kinda fun but it was short and still kinda crappy. And it's done by kitty krew. So far this is first your's short that sucks about 0.005% less than other animations.

Magyar responds:

u are crap.
all your submittions get blammed.

[Ringtone commercial.]

Death of anime character?

You had to kill the other one in that commercial, because what you killed was Inoue From famous anime bleach.
Some Bleach fans will probbably should be kinda thankful, because that commercial Was polluting that anime... Atleast i thhink so.

[The Kick-Ass Monkey]

Be better. half of rewiev in lv language.

nav slikta animaacija man taaa patiik. If youre realy latvian than you can read this :). But it can be better. to Lv.: Pameegjini labaak...
Please make somthing better.

Dumb-Latvian responds:

Man nav ne jausmas ko tu tur esi uzrakstijis.. nesaprotu latviski.. Dumb_Latvian ir tik niks.. And english too.. Have no idea whatsoever what you wrote just now.

[My Clay House Episode05]

Clay man... Nice

I luv it. Nice animation and everything is almost perfect. keep up the good work. oh i wanted for it to be longer... Plz next episode, or somthing like that.

Phill64 responds:

Thanks for the review!

You want it to be longer? :'( You know this was a special extra-length episode right?, i don't think i can handle any larger than this, i didn't even plan on keeping them this long even... but tell you what, i will try :)

Cheers!

[DCK-Christmas of Horrors]

Nice...

Wierd, but i liked it :D. It was funny but,,, I thought that the name Cycon was my idea. But i guess it's normal for someone else to thinkt about the same idea. Nice movie anyways...

[Black vs white 2 Finished]

Awesome

Gee nice effects, Smooth fight and everething else was awesome for a stick movie. For a stickman movie it was great, only you could add more interesting backgrounds.